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One evening the man went to attend friend´s marry ceremony翻譯社 he drinks a lot of wine翻譯社 and gulp face to host.The host very angry because he so not polite.
學測英文作文評分樣例
說明：主題清楚、具體，內容雄厚；重點分明、組織完全且聯貫。詞句佈局轉變厚實，幾無文法錯誤（稍有時態不一致的錯誤，例第二對的第一句Last summer...foundation後的逗號應為句號翻譯）；用字得宜（但第一段第三句中的broaden my mind應為broaden my horizons）翻譯
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本大題總分20分，首要考試考生是不是能運用辭彙、語法、修辭知識、寫出符合主題、具統一性、連貫性之短文。
One evening翻譯社 a man named Kris attended a wedding party. It was held in a luxury hotel, where there were a lot of guests.
字彙、拼字
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When he opened his eyes again, he found himself in the police station. To his dismay, he didn´t remember what he had done yesterday. A policeman came up to him and scolded him angrily. He was too embarrassed to look up at him. He really learned a lesson from the impressing mistake.
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I have ever gone to Japan once time.I learned many things in the travel.That was my first time to take the plane.I learned what I can do and what I can´t do on the plane.When we got Japan, I found first thing which is different from Taiwan is that their cars and people drive or walk on left.It shocked me because I think that worldwilde. 文法、句構 至於各品級之評分樣例，可參閱選才通訊第142期「學測與指考英文作文評分樣例」申明（http://www.ceec.edu.tw/CeecMag/articles/142-2.htm），該文以93年學測與指考英文作文為題所作之評分樣例。 3.5 |
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I´ve been to many countries before, and I enjoy my trip very much every time. To me翻譯社 travel is the best teacher. By traveling翻譯社 I can always broaden my mind and open my eyes to the things about which I had no idea before; I could also see the things which appeared only in the textbook before and that´s no doubt a wonderful experience.
申明：主題清楚。組織完全，重點尚分明。文法句構錯誤稍多。但用字、拼字偶有毛病翻譯
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About 30 minutes later, Kris was allowed to leave. He was ashamed for his "trip to the police office." He appologized to the police officer for his irrational behavior, and promised that he wouldn´t do it again.
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After the weding, My brother walked along the street and he wanted to take a taxi. Because my brother war drunk, no driver wanted to let him get on the car. Finally, my brother glazed at a car so he raised his hand and got on it. He fell asleep as soon as he sat. When he wake up, he found he was in police station. How terrible he is!
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Travel Is The Best Teacher
評分標準：
提醒：請以"Travel Is The Best Teacher"為主題，寫一篇至少120個字的英文作文。第一段針對文章主題，申明旅行的優點，並在第二段舉自己在國內或國外的觀光經驗，以印證第一段的申明。
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I remember that one time I took a trip to mainland china with my family. We paid a visit to WestLake. The scenery I saw really breathtaking. I liked the lake when I was a child. But I didn´t know how big it was! I was so excited that I ran aroud the lake. The astonishing view was not a book could give me. Suddenly, I saw a person throw a gabage to the lake. How could he do that! It actually broke the impression I used have on the Chinese people. Maybe it was a lesson for me. 內容 說明：1. 依提醒在「謎底卷」上寫一篇英文作文。 組織 指考編號8：劣－4分 |
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字彙、拼字 申明：有主題，但部份相幹論述成長不全。有結構，但未連貫成長翻譯文法、拼字、用字有很多錯誤，且影響部份文意表達。 |
指考編號4：可－11分 I have a travel in East Taiwan, there have high mountain and good view that use me think about environment and recycle.If we haven´t recycle garbage, we would destroy that good view in East Taiwan. |
學測編號1：特優－19分 The night became darker and darker and there was few cars on the streets. One of the guests was about to go home by taxi, but he was so much drunk that he couldn´t even distinguish the taxi between the police car. He hired the police car and took on. The police asked where he lived patiently, but he just kept smiled without saying any words… 試題： 編制 |
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4 Later, Kris excused himself and left the party. He stood on the road, waiting for a taxi. But, unfortunately翻譯社 he drank too much to stay conscious. Upon seeing a car coming to him, Kris waved his arms immediately, saying "Hey翻譯社 Taxi!" loudly. Then the car stopped. However, Kris wasn´t aware that was a police car翻譯社 not a taxi! |
Many people like to read books because we can learn a lot of information from it. However翻譯社 sometimes it´s not enough. For example, when the author described how spectacular the view is, we can´t feel how it is翻譯社 since we fail to experience it personally. At this moment, all we have to do is go traveling. Only traveling can solve our confusion and satisfy our curious heart. When we go traveling翻譯社 we can extend our sight, know things that we never know and even learn some lesson from it. 樣例 約請多位經驗厚實的閱卷委員對每份試卷進行初、複閱工作，而且與研究小組配合遴選學測與指考評分樣例各9份，撰寫各樣例之得分說明，學測：特優1份、優2份、可3份、差1份、劣2份；指考：特優1份、優1份、可2份、差2份、劣3份。 字彙、拼字 申明：主題明確，內容論述相當具體且完整。重點分明，組織具連貫性。詞句富變化，幾無文法毛病（第二段第二句中a lots，應為a lot。）。辭彙利用妥適，稍有拼字的毛病（例：第四段句中的explaination與最後一段中的appologized皆為錯字翻譯）。 編制 4.5 |
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採整體式評分，分為五等級：特優（19-20分）、優（15-18分）、可（10-14分）、差（5-9分）、劣（0-4分），閱卷委員於浏覽完考生試卷後，於腦海裡產生一個分數，再以各分項評分標準（表一）檢閱是否符合整體印象分數。別的，字數顯著不足，扣1分。未分段，扣1分；寫多段，不扣分翻譯
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Paul was already drunk. He didn´t know what was he doing, and even where he was.
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字彙、拼字 A police car came by and saw him. Paul thought it was a taxi and trying to stop it. The car stopped and Paul past out very soon on the car. Ten minutes later翻譯社 Paul woke up with a started. He was in the police station. The man came out and saw him with anger. |
申明：略提主題，但完全沒有成長，幾無內容可言翻譯文章太短僅二句，沒法判定英文作文的能力。字數不足，另扣一分。 We have many travel expiences in our life翻譯社 like graduate travel, camp on the mountain翻譯社 visit museams….etc.Every travel have little or much knowledge in it.Even you think that you just play in traveling, in fact, you learn more about life which you can´t learn in common life. |
組織 As a result, the man wake up look the policeman, the policeman very angry said翻譯社 "Were are you".Do you know?Then man said, I don´t know." "Why I am here?" 內容 1.5 |
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"What the hell do you thing you´re doing here?!" the man cried out. He quickly threw Paul out and trying to fix the mass Paul made.
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97指考英文考科非選擇題評分標準申明
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"1989´s Wiskey…" he said with a voice seemed to be desired of alcohol. Paul was once a man that was usually drunk every moment. That´s the reason why he was a homeless. He spent all his money on it. He started to drink, one by one, the bottle were enough to full a pakage!
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Travel is very nice.It can help us understand everywhere culture, and to meets different people.And travel also can help us to knew everything.
學測編號2：優－17分
久長以來，社會大眾對於學測或指考英文作文部份的評分，但願在教授教養與測驗能有所本，考生或許可預估本身成就等等因素下，「94指定科目英文考科非選擇題研發計畫」註分外委託四所高中與一所高職高三學生共約195位，以93年學測或93年指考英文作文為題，撰寫短文以作為樣例使用，並且獲得作答學生贊成得以將其短文用於相幹學術著作、或在研究會議中展現；作答學測考生共94位、指考101位；對於作答成績使用情形，學測同意者共71位、分歧意者8位、未填者12位，指考同意者76位、不同意者4位、未填者18位翻譯
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申明：雖點出主題但不敷顯著。敘述發展不完全，未能聯貫發展，重點安排欠妥。部分文法、用字、拼字的錯誤，影響辭意之表達。標點偶有毛病。
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97指考英文考科非選擇題分為兩部份（佔28分）：1、英文翻譯（8分）；2、英文作文（20分）翻譯英文翻譯評分原則，依語法與用字評分；英文作文則份內容（5分）、組織（5分）、文法與句構（4分）、字彙與拼字（4分）、體例（2分）等五項評分翻譯
申明：主題清楚，但部份相幹敘述成長不全，有些語意表達不甚清楚翻譯有文法毛病，然還沒有影響整體文意之表達。拼字及用字有誤，影響部份文意之表達。標點利用稍有欠妥。
It was a place full of happiness翻譯社 grace and the most important thing, food. Paul couldn´t stop himself from putting the food in his mouth though his mouth was already full of food. While he was eating, he saw a bottle of wine.
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One evening, I went to one of my friends´ weeding in my black suit. I was happy that he married a nice girl. And I was so excited that I drank too much. On my way home, my head was dazzling and my feet were heavy that I couldn´t walk well. So I gave up walking home, waving my hand to stop a taxi. Though I thought that taxi was strange with the sparking light翻譯社 I still got into the car and told the driver my address. Then I fell into a deep dream in the taxi. The next morning I woke up, I felt uncomfortable and tried to move my limbs to make myself awake. When I stood up, I found that I was in the police station instead of my bedroom. What happened last night? A policeman pointed at the police car outside and told me "That was the "taxi" you took last night翻譯社 do you have any problem now?" 註：研究人員：劉慶剛（主持人，台北大學）、高照明（台灣大學）、林秀慧（大考中間）、游春琪（大考中間）。 申明：主題清晰，但部門相關敘述成長不完全，行文不甚流暢，未能聯貫成長。文法及拼字毛病，已影響部門文意之表達翻譯 |
I very like to travel.I´m hope I can go to travel every country. |
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After my trip to Malaysia, I realized that many countries in Asia are prospering翻譯社 while Taiwan seems to be going backward. I also remind myself that we should never look down on others, and we should equip ourselves with knowledge and unique perspectives, so that we may be able to be outstanding rather than being overwhelmed by the others. We should be more active in our learning and try to set up our goals. 申明：主題敘述具體，但內容略嫌不足。句型有變化，偶有文法毛病翻譯用字尚稱得宜，雖偶有效法與拼字毛病，但未影響文意之表達。標點符號稍有不當翻譯
指考編號7：劣－4分 Travel can see a lot of country and study different educated.Some country have historic site翻譯社 some country have the religion翻譯社 and some country have the technology etc. 內容 One evening翻譯社 John was invited to his old friend´s wedding. Meeting so many classmates in university, he became more and more excited. He talked a lot with other, laughed happily翻譯社 and also, drank a lot. 申明：內容太少，細節描寫凌亂翻譯全文成長，幾無組織可言。文法、用字、拼字毛病多，嚴重影響文意表達。字數不足，另扣一分。 字彙、拼字 總分 0 One evening翻譯社 my brother dressed himself up in order to attend his friend´s weding. When he arrived at the resturant, he came across a classmate who hadn´t connected with him since he graduated from college. My brother was so happy that he drank a large amount of wine. 字彙、拼字 學測編號8：劣－3分 |
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